Preliminary exercise learner response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full . If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. WWW: Although it’s not posted to your blog I was able to mark the video file in your folder on Media Shared. It’s below the suggested length of 30 seconds (and the real brief needs to be 40+ seconds) but there’s lots to credit here. The music choice works brilliantly and the animation style is generally well done. You’ve also got a strong slogan at the end along with a clear product shot so important advertising conventions included. EBI: You did have some preliminary planning posted to your blog which is good to see but not every task was complete so that’s one to keep an eye on for pre-production and the main coursework adverts. In terms of your preliminary exercise, one important bit of feedback is concerning an original idea – this is quite similar to existing Innocent adverts so you need to come up with a completely